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Dex's First "Major" Short Film Production


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Nice job man. I agree with BP, the father son/scene was probably the best......and the fade to black in between scenes took way too long.

For what it was I thought you did great job.

The other things that stood out the most and i I thought you could improve upon was the dinner scene with the GF( awfully cheesy)... The bad guy making threats..seems that scene could have been a little better and the bad guy didn't seem like the right fit for that role. Lastly the lil bro's painful visions didn't do it for me either.

All that being said, for what you working with not a bad job at all..

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