"A Season In Review: The 2013 Carolina Panthers"

[OnlyPantherFaninMaine]

http://houndsports.com/2014/01/29/season-review-2013-carolina-panthers/

 

Short fluff piece written by yours truly. There is no information in there you don't already know but figured if anyone was bored enough they could give it a read. This is the first article I have ever written and some feedback or constructive criticism would be appreciated.

 

I intend to write more for them for the foreseeable future and will deal mostly with the Panthers, the NFCS, and the Draft. 

[SgtJoo]

Some minor editing stuff is all I noticed.

 

Good write up.

[Mr. Scot]

Friendly Hint: Your text editor left an apostrophe in "Panthers" at the beginning.

 

(makes me think you did it on an Apple product; they do that a lot)

 

Also probably meant it to say "Birth of Riverboat Ron".

 

(just exercising my inner proofreader)

[OnlyPantherFaninMaine]

Friendly Hint: Your text editor left an apostrophe in "Panthers" at the beginning.

 

(makes me think you did it on an Apple product; they do that a lot)

 

Apple product indeed. That's frustrating. 

[Mr. Scot]

Apple product indeed. That's frustrating. 

 

Why I hare posting from my iPad :lol:

 

Good content though. 

 

[OnlyPantherFaninMaine]

Unfortunately I don't believe the site has an editor for grammatical or punctuation mistakes yet. 

[PntherPryd]

what isn't fluff for the next month?

 

pie for this in the bio....".With a passion for all things sports excluding “Who Dat Nation”, "

[Mr. Scot]

Unfortunately I don't believe the site has an editor for grammatical or punctuation mistakes yet. 

 

Know any English teachers (or even English majors)? :lol:

 

Can't let this pass without mentioning one of the links from your story taking people to where they can buy this...

 

 

Spirit fingers, everyone.

 

[jarhead]

Good job!

[Jangler]

Know any English teachers (or even English majors)? :lol:

 

Can't let this pass without mentioning one of the links from your story taking people to where they can buy this...

 

spiritfingers.jpg

 

Spirit fingers, everyone.

 

 

oh my...the possibilities..

 

 

 

Finally, some fuzzy balls at my fingertips all the time.

[Mr. Scot]

oh my...the possibilities..

 

 

 

Finally, some fuzzy balls at my fingertips all the time.

 

There is no right way to respond to to this :unsure:

[ladypanther]

Nice write up.