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E-Cat - Nine to Five


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right off the bat in ur verse your off beat, no real flow to it its real choppy, so that needs some work...it smooths out as you go on, but you keep having sketchy places in the flow that don't "flow"

your lyrics arent bad, nothing jumped out to me punchlines or wordplay or anything

over all it isnt bad but your delivery and flow need some work

you can check my music out at

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right off the bat in ur verse your off beat, no real flow to it its real choppy, so that needs some work...it smooths out as you go on, but you keep having sketchy places in the flow that don't "flow"

your lyrics arent bad, nothing jumped out to me punchlines or wordplay or anything

over all it isnt bad but your delivery and flow need some work

you can check my music out at

http://soundcloud.com/13amp

I appreciate your feedback, however I disagree with your assessment. But to each their own.

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