Video I Made For Class.

[Dex]

Thanks

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[CarolinaKid704]

lol, yeaaaa girl your gonna miss me when i'm gone so you better love me while i'm here. well played sir.

Two clips stood out to me with the girl chasing the duck (care free) and also when she was overlooking the highway(curious)

The storyline was clear and I think the beginning was very well done. I probably would have changed up the last minute or two but what the fug do i know. Girl was obviously in a state of shock so you did your thing.

70 out of 100 well done!! .

[Black]

That's a C-.

[Ja Rhule]

No sex scene?

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Now, get to work and we'll wait for a new video. Make sure to use better resolution camera.

Good luck to you, young producer. Make us proud.

Oh yeah, you're welcome.

[FuzzyPanther]

I think it was pretty good, especially the first half. I was expecting the "teenager killed" to be the girl though. So when it came back and she was driving, I kept waiting for you to show the accident that killed her. Then I realized that the guy had died. Puppies, kittens and children dying will always evoke more emotion. (I think).

My wife was watching this show called "Cats 101" one time, and it talked about the mother cat and her five kittens in a burning house. The mother cat carries out the kittens one by one, saves four of them, but her and the last kitten died. My wife was bawling, and I was all like "I wish my wife wasn't here because that makes me want to cry." Hope this helps.

[CarolinaNCSU]

I thought it would be the girlfriend who died too. Anyway, nice job. A lot better than anything I could do.

[Dex]

The beginning was ment to show how happy and carefree she was with him before the accident and living without him in the second half.

[Inimicus]

Not trying to be some film critic asshole here but you asked for feedback…

Having seen the clip in its entirety the story makes sense, but as I watched it I spent too much time trying to figure out what was going on to really let the story take over.

Opening wasn’t strong enough to carry the end that just seemed to drag on.

[Dex]

Yeah, I wasn't even going to post it but it's always good to get feedback. Entry level class.

[mmmbeans]

Not bad for intro stuff... Needs more of an arc... we should end at a different point than we started. Good job though. Keep it up.

Color balance your damn camera.