Poorly Worded Paragraph

[Proudiddy]

Just wanted to share this... It was in a HuffPost article about a murder, which obviously is no laughing matter. But, this is one of the worst articles I've ever read, and many of the reader comments say the same.

This paragraph completely obfuscates the seriousness of the crime:

Allen Prue had plowed Jenkins' driveway and asked her out a couple of times, police said. She told a friend that she felt uncomfortable around him and later had him stop plowing, but that he showed up drunk at her home in autumn 2011 to ask whether he could plow the following year.

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Here is the rest of this poorly constructed article:

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/03/29/melissa-jenkins-lured-by-allen-and-patricia-prue_n_1387536.html?ref=mostpopular

[Jangler]

stopped reading at HuffPost...

[PhillyB]

Why? There are some decent articles on there.

[Floppin]

Because it's a "liberal" mouthpiece

[cookinbrak]

I don't get what's horrible about it, other than a single runon sentence at the beginning.

[ThaJackal]

Why? There are some decent articles on there.

Prolly the same reason that you stop reading when it says 'Fox News'.

[Proudiddy]

I don't get what's horrible about it, other than a single runon sentence at the beginning.

I found the emphasis on "plow" to be distracting.

[Anybodyhome]

Prolly the same reason that you stop reading when it says 'Fox News'.

Well..... Fox stopped doing "news" years ago. All they do now is fabricate tales about the current administration.