Can I get some feedback on this podcast?

[malik]

A random comedy podcast, www.coliseumradio.com

any criticism would be nice I just want to imprive.

[malik]

i cant get one comment? I refuse to beleive it thats bad.

[Kettle]

file not found when i tried

[malik]

file not found when i tried

Try it now, I even uploaded a new one which i think is so much better than the first.

warning for people, some cursing.

[Kitten Diver]

Do you have a video version? I'm a visual learner.

[bleys]

just started listening... 1st thing I'd recommend is get the podcast started and then be random if you want.. also, think of some topics to talk about randomly instead of talking about a dude sucking his own dick.

of those topics, I'd stay away from what it'd be like to suck your own dick.. .lol

[bleys]

unless that's the audience you're looking for.. if you want a podcast to catch on with a lot of people, you have to stay within the confines of what people want to hear. you might pick up 20 listeners nationwide talking about this poo. (only about 2 minutes in..)

[malik]

unless that's the audience you're looking for.. if you want a podcast to catch on with a lot of people, you have to stay within the confines of what people want to hear. you might pick up 20 listeners nationwide talking about this poo. (only about 2 minutes in..)

Thanks, let me get an update when u finish both podcasts.

[Dpantherman]

What the hell am I listening to bro??

[Kettle]

i value the opinions of bleys and Dpantherman. i'm not gonna listen. sorry.

[malik]

unless that's the audience you're looking for.. if you want a podcast to catch on with a lot of people, you have to stay within the confines of what people want to hear. you might pick up 20 listeners nationwide talking about this poo. (only about 2 minutes in..)

hey kevin smith made a podcast career out of that lmao.

[teeray]

Comedy is another one of my passions.

The only thing I would say is I think you want the comedy to be organic and improvised but I would suggest that you guys have bits and "act" like it is spontaneous and organic. Sit down with Andre, or whoever, and put bits in place and have a direction for your podcast and actually write down some jokes and bits and go from there. Even then there will be times where comedy can grow and there is still room for improvisation.

I applaud you for putting yourself out there and keep working. Just remember that comedy is hard.

[Dpantherman]

In theory, starting off with comedy is great. But after 2 minutes, the show should have started (maybe even sooner considering the subject matter that was being discussed)

[bleys]

I would have to hear Kevin Smith to tell the difference. honestly, I think it has to do with your voice and then how you speak.

I would try to sharpen the material and then go random in certain moments.. otherwise it just sounds like some guy and his friend(s) having a random/general conversation, and not a podcast.

but like I said, I'd have to hear Kevin Smith to pick up on why his sound and topics were effective.

I don't really think there's much logic that can be given to you with this topic. It's a podcast, it's more about how people receive you, and that doesn't necessarily mean "why" can be explained.