A prayer for 2015

[top dawg]

I like it...it's Sunday morning, a nice prayer, flows nicely, well thought out, original, just overall a very good piece literature.

9/10...will definitely read again.

Don't listen to the haters OP. The huddle is filled with mostly hungover drunks on Sunday mornings.

I didn't have a problem with the thought behind the prayer, just the lack of punctuation that basically tanked it.

Dear God,

On this day, the 17th of May

St Keuchly and St Newton are here to play

Two freaks of nature, Both are one of a kind

Racking up tackles, and breaking ankles; blowing minds

I offer to thee, the mole of drew brees

Blood of the Bucs, and the wings of the birds.

Amen

[the butch]

Why is Zod letting All-Pro content leak out? Must still have some app malfunctions.

[Jeremy Igo]

Why is Zod letting All-Pro content leak out? Must still have some app malfunctions.

Some things are so powerful they cannot be contained.

[Mr Mojo Risin]

Yep gotta love the offseason

[PhillyB]

excommunicate OP

[Future of the Funchise]

Change the wings of birds to falcon wings and we are golden. Helps maintain the flow and balance of the rhyme scheme.

[cookinbrak]

[Chaos]

[MHS831]

New Rule:  No more poetry.  Ever.  Unless Luke or Cam wrote it.

[Mother Grabber]

God hates this thread

what about Buddha?